Tuesday, 25 September 2012

Treatment 2


Treatment

·         The genre of my short film is a comedy.

 

·         The summary of my short film is firstly the main character is planning to get to the Olympic stadium however although this is the base line of the story the concept is to make a mockery of modern day stereotypes. The main character is a foreigner who has just got out of the airport and his journey begins by getting into a minicab. This journey will consist of many difficulties each with a specific purpose, the main character doesn’t speak however use his face and body to express his feelings and point of view, this will be further strengthened with the use of sound effects.  Our short film consists of the main character being quiet (no diologue) throughout the whole film however we use music to explain his emotions. We also have a taxi driver to take him to the Olympic stadium but the taxi driver ends up kicking him out of the taxi because he checks the drivers personal bag because his suspicious the driver is a terrorist. We also have a lot of other characters as people who give him directions to the stadium once he gets booted out the taxi. There is a beautiful girl as another character because he falls in love with her when he finds her on the bus. And lastly we have the ticket inspector at the Stratford station which tells him that his ticket is expired. The theme of our short film is basically the comedy that the foreigner (main character) does during his journey.  

 

·         Our ideas are inspired by Mr Bean, in his films he doesn’t speak but the audience can understand what is going in the scenes. We are using this similar style of comedy in our short film as well. However what makes us different is that we are putting music behind particular scenes to add greater satire. We have also used inspiration from comedies such as Desmond’s, this is a comedy has an African identity which will help us to get an idea of what African culture consists of so aspects can be portrayed in to our film. Also another comedy that helped to inspire our film was Goodness Gracious Me. This is a comedy based greatly on Asian culture, it manipulates and makes fun of specific traditions or norms in their culture. This is what makes the comedy so funny and successful and it’s the type of concept we will try to implement in our film.

 

·         The audience for our short film are teens between the ages of 12-19, our film is sports related and the jokes portrayed on our short film are kind of mature. For example during the bus journey his gaze falls upon a beautiful girl and falls in love so he starts to day dream about her. So the topic of love and falling easily in love will be related to teens and their lifestyle so they will be able to connect with the scenes. 

 

·         The approximate length of our film will be 4-5mins.

 

·         We will need permission to film on the bus from the bus driver, when he gets a ride to Stratford station. We will also need permission of people on the road when he randomly asks them for directions. One of our group members can drive so he will be acting out as the taxi driver. When he gets to the station he gets stopped by the ticket inspector and that’s when he finds out that the ticket is expired, so we will need to ask permission if we can film the ticket inspector.

 

·         When he is on the taxi, the taxi driver tries to act like a terrorist and he is dressed out in a religious garment and has a bag on the passenger seat which is where the main character thinks the bomb is, however we obviously are not trying to offend anyone.

 

·         Our film could be screened on youtube because it is a short clip.

Treatment 1


Treatment

·         The genre of my short film is a comedy.

 

·         The summary of my short film is firstly the main character is planning to get to the Olympic stadium. He is a foreigner and has just landed and his journey begins at city airport. Because he is a foreigner he suffers a lot of difficulty to get to the stadium, he doesn’t speak any English just uses his facial expressions and actions to explain.  Our short film consists of the main character being quiet (no diologue) throughout the whole film however we use music to explain his emotions. We also have a taxi driver to take him to the Olympic stadium but the taxi driver ends up kicking him out of the taxi because he checks the drivers personal bag because his suspicious the driver is a terrorist. We also have a lot of other characters as people who give him directions to the stadium once he gets booted out the taxi. There is a beautiful girl as another character because he falls in love with her when he finds her on the bus. And lastly we have the ticket inspector at the Stratford station which tells him that his ticket is expired. The theme of our short film is basically the comedy that the foreigner (main character) does during his journey.  

 

·         Our ides are inspired by Mr Bean, in his films he doesn’t speak but the audience can understand what is going in the scenes. We are using this similar style of comedy in our short film as well. However what makes us different is that we are putting music behind particular scenes to make the scene funnier.

 

·         The audience for our short film are teens between the ages of 12-19, our film is sports related and the jokes portrayed on our short film are kind of mature. For example during the bus journey his gaze falls upon a beautiful girl and falls in love so he starts to day dream about her. So the topic of love and falling easily in love will be related to teens and their lifestyle so they will be able to connect with the scenes. 

 

·         The approximate length of our film will be 4-5mins.

 

·         We will need permission to film on the bus from the bus driver, when he gets a ride to Stratford station. We will also need permission of people on the road when he randomly asks them for directions. One of our group members can drive so he will be acting out as the taxi driver. When he gets to the station he gets stopped by the ticket inspector and that’s when he finds out that the ticket is expired, so we will need to ask permission if we can film the ticket inspector.

 

·         When he is on the taxi, the taxi driver tries to act like a terrorist and he is dressed out in a religious garment and has a bag on the passenger seat which is where the main character thinks the bomb is, however we obviously are not trying to offend anyone.

 

·         Our film could be screened on youtube because it is a short clip.

Audience Feedback


Audience Feedback

 

-“Good idea – if it comes out right”

-“Where will it take place?”  

 It will take place in a variety of places. First of all it will take place in the airport where the main character will arrive, then it will move to the taxi scene where the main character will get in to a fight with the taxi driver, then the taxi driver will drop off the main character to ‘Liverpool street station’ so that we can film our fast paced scene in order to empathise the isolation in which he feels as a person who is not from the country.  Then the main character will get on a bus which will take him to Stratford, in which the main character will end up at the Olympic park however he will find that he is too late.

-“What stereotypes will you be picking up on?”

We will be exploring the common day to day stereotypes that take place in today’s modern day and society which will be ‘Indian’ and ‘African’ stereotypes which will be a main factor in our comedy scene.

-“Maybe you could have an Indian guy that meets an African woman”

Thank you for inputting this idea and we feel that this could work within our short film. This idea would fit in perfectly and it would help to mix the different themes and stereotypes a lot easier than we had previously planned.

-“Don’t understand how you are going to mix the different themes”

The different themes will blend together in a scene that will show the main character being interested in an African woman.

-“Are all the different themes going to be merged together?”

Yes, they will be blended together throughout the short film in various parts and scenes as I have discussed above.

-“I find it confusing”

At first, it does sound confusing however, like great comedy shows that have been the nation’s favourite such as ‘Mr Bean’ are confusing at first.  Nonetheless it works because of the nature of the program as we plan on using non diegetic sound to try replicate the effect that ‘Mr Bean’ had on its audience.

-“Won’t it be difficult to do as a short video?”

Well, it sounds very difficult however to us we beg to differ. In out ours as a group, we see it as a very simple procedure, the only difficult task would be getting the actors which will take part in out short film. We’ve given it some thought and for the time being, we have decided to ask some other students from the ‘performing arts’  section of college but if nobody offers to help us out, then we will be using some of our friends in order to help us out with the short film.

-“Too many things to do within 4-5 minutes”

Well, at first it does sound like a lot of work to do to put in to a 5 minute short film however after careful planning we don’t see how it wouldn’t fit in to the concept as we planned it to just about fit within the 5 minute time limit.

-“Could be a funny short film”

We agree as we are going for the comedy aspect, this makes a great impact on our decision on keeping the story line or not because now we know that this idea could work as a short film we will keep looking for more ways to improve our short film.

Monday, 17 September 2012

creative ideas

Today, my group and i realised that we will be pursuing the short video instead of the music videos. We agreed to a short film about a person who is on their way to olympics; with an expired ticket. The short video will have regards to comedy aspects. Although, the night is still young and there may be room for new ideas in the very near future. We as a group spent today's lesson researching the comedy aspects of small videos online from which we can gather ideas from in order to help us continue our brainstorm.

- Citizen Khan
- Desmond
- Various music soundtracks we gathered we can use throughout our short video

Wednesday, 12 September 2012

Introduction

Hello, welcome to my blog all my a2 media work will be posted here.